Friday, January 31, 2025

Dead Reckoning, Chapter Thirty-Two. An Inspector Gilles Maintenon Mystery #10. Louis Shalako.








Louis Shalako



With the Beretta tucked into the back of his belt, hidden by the long shirt-tails, and keeping his left side turned to them in what must appear an odd move, he moved forward three or four metres. It kept them thinking. He kept those hands up, and that’s all they needed to see. He needed to get well clear of the door, and to divide their attention. The MAB, standard issue service pistol on his right hip, the flap pulled well up and over, and tucked in behind the belt, safety off, would be invisible…hopefully. He stopped, staring off into the woods, puffing contentedly on the cigar.

“Hello? Hello? Is there anybody out there—”

“All right asshole, we’re over here—what an idiot.”

“We’re not here for silly fucking mind-games.” Another voice, separate and distinct.

There were four or five of them, and then there was Capucine, still clutching her basket. Two men had her, firmly held by the upper arms, he could see that much out of his peripheral vision.

He stopped, and turned to his left to face them.

“Life is a game. There are no rules.” He took another left-handed puff and blew smoke in their direction.

They kind of froze when they saw that 7.65-millimetre MAB hanging there in a brown leather holster.

He spat the cigar out, off to one side.

“Fuck you, all of you, and all of the God-damned fucking horses you rode in on…”

“Fuck off, wise guy—I’ll shoot the girl right now if that’s what you want.”

“Hey. Monsieur Blue Eyes. How’s the fishing these days, or were you just trolling for queers.”

The man’s mouth dropped and his eyes bugged out at that one—but this was their friend from the riverbank, sure as hell…

Éliott stared at them, wordless, then engaging the eyes of Capucine. He winked, and the one holding her stared in amazement. His face was turning red. She gave him the slightest of nods and her eyes darted back and forth…thinking it through, measuring distances, calculating the odds here and there…her head cocked a little and she was right back on him.

There were the four toughs and a smaller man, older, in a sleek grey suit.

That would be the boss.

“Maintenon’s not here. Which one of you fucking cocksuckers is left-handed. I will trade you this old hermit that lives here—for that man. You can keep the girl, she don’t mean nothing to me.” He glared at them. “Yeah, I figure it was a left-handed piece of shit that hit that old man on the head, with a big fucking stinking rock that you picked up, right there on the trail. Cocksucker. Right by that log on the riverbank. I want that miserable, low-life piece of shit.”

Éliott made a couple of funny little signs. They knew she was deaf all right, and possibly didn’t see much harm in it—not understanding the significance of it all. Pissed-off as they were. It was like they just couldn’t take it seriously. They were after Maintenon—not him. First, he crossed his hands across his chest, and then put them out wide, just like the fucking Pope. The symbol for love. Then he held up the right hand, palm facing her, index finger pointing straight up. He stuck out his thumb, sideways, then he lifted the pinky finger…the letters I, L and Y. I-L-Y—I love you. He waggled the little finger, just so she got it.

“It’s okay. I’m just letting the girl know everything’s going to be all right—”

She stared, open mouthed as the scumbags looked on in sardonic amusement. They looked at each other, grinning, fools that they were. Tears popped out in those beautiful eyes, and she nodded.

Both hands up and in front again, he closed his fists and then spread his fingers—drop.

Just…drop. And just like all the others, her eyes were on that gun on his belt, and right back up again...

Capucine went limp, half-hauling the stupid bastard down with her, and, just at that exact same second the hermit stepped out of the doorway, shotgun leveled and cocked on the left side barrel. His finger was on the trigger and the thumb right there by the right-side hammer.

Éliott’s right hand, already dropping, slapped leather about the same time they all stopped, turned to gape, to think, and then try and decide what to do with their fucking guns, now that there were two targets, and with the girl kicking up trouble. What were they doing, waiting for instructions…too fucking late, Monsieur.

He shot the one half-standing over Capucine as she rolled and twirled her legs and brought him down anyways. It looked like he’d gotten that one right in the temple and he wasn’t getting up. The one almost directly behind them, his own vision and attention suddenly obscured and diverted, stepping back quickly and trying not to get entangled, flinched about the time the hermit’s shotgun boomed, hopefully taking the one on the farthest left. Éliott had already pulled the trigger on this one. Another hit, right in the guts. He went down, clutching his middle, eyes wide and horrified and staring straight into his own.

He was screaming bloody murder and good for him…

There were a couple of reflexive pistol shots, coming in their direction but they missed, spanking off the ground into whining richochets…

The shotgun boomed again, there was a lot of yelling and now the sound of dogs barking off in the distance. Éliott found the little man in a grey suit through all the smoke and carnage. It was the fog of war, and he lined up on a running target. He squeezed off shot after shot until the fucker went down, sliding along face down until he hit the base of a small tree. One more squeeze and she just clicked. He dropped the weapon and pulled the other one. There might have been a little twitch or two, but the man in the grey suit was definitely down.

Smirnov down after five shots in the back.

Capucine was up on her feet in an instant, eyes blazing at Éliott in one quick flash, and then she was gone, bounding away like a fucking rabbit.

Someone was yelling and fucking clapping…clapping? Dropping into a crouch, he spun to the right, both hands on the weapon. There were people in the woods.

“…don’t shoot! Éliott. Hold fire! Hold fire. It’s me! It’s Hubert! It’s Alphonse and there’s another officer…Constable Garnier.” They were up and crashing through the underbrush. “Hold fire! Hold your fire!”

The hermit, behind, was reloading, hands shaking all over the place in sheer excitement, or sure as shooting…he would have fired already. Two hot shell-casings lay, still smoking on the ground at his feet.

He was cussing and groaning something awful. A fresh shell dropped and he stooped to scrabble at it.

“Fuck.”

“Hold on, sir. They’re friends of mine.” But there were more people coming up the trail, and the dogs were much closer now…just around the next corner. “You okay with that thing?”

The hermit nodded grimly, snapping her shut and cocking one barrel…one at a time, that’s the way.

“Bring ‘em on, partner.”

And there they were, five or six of them, fucking big ugly dogs, straining at the leash and being rather strenuously held back by men in the blue uniforms of the police.

“Hold fire! Hold fire!”

That sure sounded good from where he was standing.

He heaved a big breath, and then another—

Thank God.

Now, the only question was what had happened to Capucine. She sure as hell wasn’t with these guys.

There were five bodies lying around in some state of disarray. They couldn’t all be dead, or so he thought, although the one guy had gone real quiet. His eyes were still open and he moaned and groaned, flat on his back. With a little luck, they might even have one or two left to talk. He put the gun up as the local cops arrived and the three Paris detectives waded through chest-high weeds and stumbled over rocks and berry-canes as they picked their way down the slope. He bent and picked up his own gun. Pulling the clip, he reloaded, also taking a quick look to make sure the tip of the barrel wasn’t clogged with good old topsoil.

Now, it was all over bar the shouting.

Maybe.

Hubert got there first.

“That was a beautiful thing to see—just beautiful.”

This was one report he would enjoy writing.

“Nice shooting, young man.” Alphonse patted him on the back. “You might want to go after that girl, Éliott.”

Éliott nodded, eyeing the new guy, but it was only to be expected. No one was irreplaceable, after all.

“Good morning, detective. I’m Garnier—” He took a good look around. “Nice work, incidentally.”

Éliott grunted in sheer relief.

“Thank you, thank you very much—”

“We’d better check these bodies. Secure those weapons.” Showing his identification, Garnier grabbed a shoulder and went off with one of the locals to do just that.

As for the hermit, he’d taken one look at the descending crowd and retreated back into his hidey-hole; with the door bolted and the curtains closed.

“If that wasn’t Gilles, I’ll be a monkey’s uncle.”

“Here.” He handed off the hermit’s Beretta to Alphonse. “Want to make a bet? I’ll give you ten to one, that this weapon is registered to the Inspector.”

“Oh—oh.”

“…you might want to get these damned dogs out of here, or you’ll never get him out of there.”

Éliott could only give the barest of explanations, and then he was off, sprinting down that trail after Capucine.

 

***

érotisme et transgression

Well, she wasn’t at home. The place was locked up and clearly her mother and any other family members were out. It was like he knew virtually nothing about her. She might have locked herself in. He took a look behind the house, and there didn’t seem to be too many bicycles around. With no idea of whether she had friends or relatives nearby, he set off down the road to the village. Banging on doors and windows wasn’t going to do much good if she was still in there, yet he rather doubted it.

It was going to be a hot day after all—

He’d run out of steam but he could still walk. The ankles were still tender, even now.

He hadn’t gotten more than a few hundred metres down the road when a big black car pulled up alongside.

The passenger side window was open and Alphonse was alone in the car.

“Come on, boy, hop in. I’ll give you a ride.”

The vehicle stopped and Éliott climbed in.

“Not at home, eh?”

He shook his head.

“No. I don’t think so.”

“We’ll find her…somewhere.”

“Yes.”

“I doubt if she’ll go to the police station. They’re saying she blew right through them.  One guy fell down trying to get out of the way. It’s a good thing he managed to hang onto the dog, or she’d still be running. Or maybe treed somewhere. She just jumped right over him and kept on going…” He looked over at Éliott. “I understand she has a few ribbons for track and field. Back in high school, you know.”

“Huh.”

Their eyes met.

“Why don’t we try the Church? Wouldn’t surprise me, you know.”

Éliott nodded, but surely, someone around here would have seen her.

It was as good a place to start as any.

 

***

Alphonse had stayed in the car.

A bicycle leaned up against the wall, just beside the steps out front.

Éliott opened up the door to the fine old church and saw a forlorn figure, right side, right up in the front row. She was kneeling at the end of the pew, hands in the classic position.

It was her.

Head down, in prayer, of course she wouldn’t hear the door. The place wasn’t real big. Just then, the door of the confessional booth opened and an elderly woman in a veil came out, clutching her purse and adjusting her hat, glancing incuriously at him on the way past. The door on the other side opened and the priest came out, stopping at the sight of him.

Seeing a stranger in his church, and knowing a little or maybe even a lot about the girl, he came and stood protectively at the head of the centre aisle. All set to provide passive, non-violent resistance or something like that—

The shepherd of his flock.

“Good morning, sir. Welcome. Was there something I can help you with—”

“It’s all right Father.” Éliott genuflected and did the blessing, crossing himself with a little dab of the Holy Water. “I’m Detective Éliott LeBeaux of the Sûreté. I was just wondering. How much does a marriage license cost around here, anyways?”

The priest relaxed. He nodded and smiled.

“Normally, about fifteen francs. In this case, we might be happy enough to waive the fee.” He coughed, reached over and touched Capucine on the shoulder, seemingly oblivious to all around her, eyes closed and lips moving silently. “You, ah—you might want to ask the young lady, first.”

She straightened up, saw the Father, and also, that he was intent on something else.

She looked around.

Éliott!” In something less than a couple of heartbeats, she was up from the pew and into his arms, which had closed around the girl in something that was both beautiful and natural.

They had eyes only for each other, although the world still turned around them…

Whatever it was, it was as big as all of life—and death, and beyond.

It was—love.

And that was about all anyone could ever really say.

The Father gave his head a little shake. He gave a little nod and fought back a smile.

Turning to the altar, he bobbed and made the Sign of the Cross.

Turning again, he engaged Éliott through the poor guy’s watering eyes.

“There are days like this, when I just love my job.” He glanced up at the Cross in the wall. “Anyways, whenever you beautiful young people are ready, I shall be in my office.”

Turning, with a little swish from the vestments, he headed for a narrow door off to the side.

He stopped and looked back.

“I'll tell you what. I'll pay the fee myself. Just this once.” He smiled. “Bless you, my children.”

And then he was gone.

 

 

The End

 

Previous.

Previous.

Chapter One, Scene One.

Chapter One, Scene Two.

Chapter Two.

Chapter Three.

Chapter Four.

Chapter Five.

Chapter Six.

Chapter Seven.

Chapter Eight.

Chapter Nine.

Chapter Ten.

Chapter Eleven.

Chapter Twelve.

Chapter Thirteen.

Chapter Fourteen.

Chapter Fifteen.

Chapter Sixteen.

Chapter Seventeen.

Chapter Eighteen.

Chapter Nineteen.

Chapter Twenty.

Chapter Twenty-One.

Chapter Twenty-Two.

"...thank you...thank you very much."

Chapter Twenty-Three.

Chapter Twenty-Four.

Chapter Twenty-Five.

Chapter Twenty-Six.

Chapter Twenty-Seven.

Chapter Twenty-Eight.

Chapter Twenty-Nine.

Chapter Thirty.

 

Real Change is Incremental.

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Thank you for reading.

 

 

 

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Thank you for reading.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Wednesday, January 29, 2025

Dead Reckoning, Chapter Thirty-One. An Inspector Gilles Maintenon Mystery #10. Louis Shalako.








Louis Shalako




Capucine’s heart was full as she packed her handbasket, with whatever she’d bought, whatever she could afford on her limited pay. Whatever was in the garden. Whatever she could scrounge, essentially.

Quite frankly, she didn’t know what to think of all of this—

Thoughts of Éliott and the old man filled her mind as she left her mother’s house, and headed off, up the road, and onto the trail leading to the woods, the river, and ultimately to the cliff-place. It was another brilliant morning, and she didn’t have to work until one o’clock.

The load tugged at her arm, to the extent she had to shift sides from time to time. The grass was still wet and the dew was cool on her toes.

There was yet another bottle of cognac in there, more beer. There were still more small cartons of cigars.

Éliott had given her some money, quite a bit of money, actually, and a list, and a note. After going to the police station, sworn to secrecy and on his mysterious errand, she’d done a bit of shopping in town. The basket was heavy indeed, the load this time including clean, white towels and a couple of washcloths, laundry soap in addition to the food.

There were other thoughts.

He’d asked for a book from the library, a book of signs. If that didn’t make the heart skip a beat, nothing would. She’d brought him that the day before, and she wondered how he was making out with it. Admittedly, it might be a tough read for the uninterested or the uninitiated.

It was Éliott more than the old man that plagued her thoughts these days, and nights.

While she liked him, and he obviously liked her, his intentions were anything but clear.

As for her imagination, it was working overtime lately, not just in the romantic sense, but also in a kind of sheer, unmitigated terror—

If he was a liar, he was very good at it, and she wanted to believe him so very badly. His attempts to sign with her were either very sweet or very cynical, she could not quite decide which.

He was also very good with the old man, a sign of something, something she wasn’t too sure of. If it was a kind of manipulation, what could he ever hope to gain from it? The old man had nothing of his own, nothing to steal in the first place.

Perhaps it was a sincere wish to help, and yet the challenges would be almost insurmountable.

The average person wouldn’t have bothered. It was all too easy to write them off and to move on with one’s own business. He seemed to have an awful lot of money, for a drifter, and that didn’t seem all too likely either.

And then there was her—

She was a normal, healthy young woman, who also just happened to be deaf. She had always been alone, and she’d known that from a very young age. It really was all up to her in this world. She was different, in a world that did not easily accept such differences. Not unnaturally, her thoughts had, in the privacy of her own room and in the darkness of the night, turned to thoughts of érotisme et transgression. She had no shame on that score. The Church didn’t know everything, although God might, (a rather uncomfortable thought), but the human body, the human mind, the very soul of a person was nourished far more by pleasure, rather than by any amount of pain and suffering.

Which had their place, to be sure—

There might even be such a thing as love.

It was also pure fantasy, much of the time, and she knew that as well.

She had been hurt before.

Upon reflection, it would seem that she had been lonely, and that for a very long time now.

Capucine was a good Catholic, whatever that meant.

But.

Sooner or later, Éliott would have to show his true colours.

Only time would tell, but something was sure to happen.

It always did.

***

The sun had gone behind a cloud, and the birds had held up for a moment, but only for a moment.

When the man stepped out onto the trail before her, up in the hills as she was now, at first, she simply didn’t comprehend the reality. She knew the trail, and the side trails, and this man had just stepped out of the bushes. Her initial thought was that he was lost. More likely, just having a quick pee and then moving on. It meant nothing, until a second man had stepped out from the other side. Had he been urinating as well? She kept walking, prepared to ignore them, but she stopped dead when she realized both had pistols, and those pistols were leveled right at her—

She gasped, turned to run, although that was hopeless enough at a distance of ten or twelve metres. She knew that much. The bushes, the forest were right there—

This is when she screamed. Two more men had come out of the bushes behind her, and one of them was right there in her face, and his big hands clawed at her, her arms and her sweater and her basket. They were right on her, dragging her to the ground, controlling her, and more than anything, trying to prevent her inevitable, one good scream. Another man, this one in a grey suit, stepped out of the bushes with a look of anticipation on his face.

Biting at a hand, throwing punches, trying to get at someone’s testicles with an elbow, a knee, a fist, the man cursed as she let out one good, long, all-encompassing, blood-curdling, heart-stopping scream.

A big hard hand clamped down again and cut it off—

“Good girl. That’s a good girl, just shut up now, all right.” He held the gun in front of her eyes and gave her arm a good twist.

“I’ll bet they heard that one—” Someone said as she cried. “It’s too bad she can’t hear us, it might be better...”

She was sobbing, and he gave her a cuff on the ear.

“…oh, look. I wonder what’s in that lovely picnic basket…” Another voice, this one was pure evil.

Struggle as she might, she wasn’t getting away and they hauled her to her feet. Jerking from side to side, she tried to break the hold.

“…right lads. Let’s get on with it.”

She cried more bitter tears as one of them knocked her on the head with the barrel of his gun and then they were dragging her along, helpless but still mostly on her feet.

***

When the scream came, Éliott didn’t know what to think. It was so unfamiliar out here. His initial thought was a bird, perhaps an eagle or something big like that taking a rabbit, perhaps right outside that very door. Admittedly, he didn’t know too much about such things.

When the pair of them heard voices, men’s voices, not too far away, clearly coming up along the trail, and then the scream came again, it could only mean one thing.

Éliott was up like a shot, knocking the chair over backwards as he hastened to the door, where not incidentally, he had hung his coat—and in an inner pocket of that rather offensively-plaid hunting jacket was his pistol and a spare clip.

He knew the shotgun was loaded. The hermit had acknowledged that there were a couple or three spare shells kicking around the house. The hermit was up, heading down towards the back of the place, and Éliott was peeking out through a crack in the curtains.

There wasn’t anything much to be seen.

“I’m coming.” The hermit stuck close to the left wall, coming up to where the shotgun leaned against the wall. “See anything?”

“Not yet.”

“Here.” Coming across past the door, the old man snapped a match and lit up a couple of the thin, black cheroots.

He stuck one into the corner of Éliott’s mouth.

“Thank you.” Holy—but the hermit was a fairly cool customer.

There was someone out there, a voice.

“Maintenon! Inspector Gilles Maintenon! I want to talk to you.”

The hermit looked at Éliott.

“Who in the hell is this Inspector Gilles fucking Maintenon?”

Éliott’s lip curled in feral humour.

“How in the hell would I know—” He thought. “Just keep quiet—they’ll get to it. Anyhow, I reckon they’ve got Capucine. She must have been due, just about now.”

A quick glance at the watch confirmed it.

It was time to speak up. He opened up the door, just a few centimetres.

“I’m terribly sorry. There’s no one here by that name. Are you sure you have the right address?”

“We’re not after you, asshole. We’re not too interested in the girl. It’s Maintenon we want.”

“Show me the girl.” Looking over, the hermit was getting redder and redder in the face and Éliott had better do something quick or the old fucker would probably go bolting out there, both barrels blazing. “Otherwise, fuck right off, Monsieur.”

“Come on out and have a look—if you’re so tough.”

The hermit was at his shoulder, shotgun in the left hand, something black and heavy in the other. It was a gun—a Beretta, small calibre, semi-automatic pistol. Éliott’s jaw dropped, but what the hell.

“Here.”

“Hang on.”

Two guns were better than one. He quickly undid the belt to slide the holster of his own MAB, standard issue, onto his right hip. The hermit’s eyes popped a little at the sight of that, but he didn’t object. As for the Beretta, it appeared to be loaded, it was fairly clean and important things like that.

“Thank you.”

“It’s me they want, boy. You don’t have to go out there.”

“Yeah, fuck, but who in the hell are you?”

The hermit stared at him.

“And why you, anyways?”

The hermit shook his head.

He chewed on a lip, thinking.

“I don’t know. I’ve been sort of hoping that it would all come back to me.” He pushed in close again and took a quick turn at looking out a crack in the curtains. “They say another good blow on the head will do it sometimes…I rather have my doubts, or I might have even given it a try. There are plenty of rocks around…”

That voice came again.

“We haven’t got all day, sonny boy. In about a minute we’re going to start breaking bones, maybe even cutting the girl. You understand, asshole?”

Éliott yelled right back.

“Yeah, I understand. Asshole.” I’ll cut you first, motherfucker—

He pointed and the hermit scooted back to the other side. In a low voice, Éliott gave him the simplest possible instructions, in the hopes that he might even be able to do it.

“You don’t have to go out there either, you know. In which case, they’re probably just coming in anyways. It’s your choice. You do have five shells. They’ll push her in the door first.”

“I know. I know.” He nodded. “The trouble is, of course, is that I want to—”

“Huh.”

“Let’s get these bastards.”

“I agree, sir. Let’s get these fucking bastards…”

This time of day, the sun would be above that cliff. The interior would be all shadow. Opening the door, wide open, as far as it would go, left-handed and using a broken old shovel, staying back in the dimness as far as possible, he called out again.

“All right. I’m coming out—and you’d better be playing straight with this one.” He put the shovel down, nice and quiet.

He pulled up the right hand shirt tail and tucked it into the top of his trousers. It wouldn’t do to get all snagged up there. He twisted the butt of the pistol so it stuck out a little, hopefully making it easier to grab in a hurry.

He gave the hermit a little nod and stepped, very cautiously, hands sort of held half-high, well out in front of him, hands going out the door first, and then he came out into the light.

It was just like they said—they wanted Gilles, not him.


END

Previous.

Chapter One, Scene One.

Chapter One, Scene Two.

Chapter Two.

Chapter Three.

Chapter Four.

Chapter Five.

Chapter Six.

Chapter Seven.

Chapter Eight.

Chapter Nine.

Chapter Ten.

Chapter Eleven.

Chapter Twelve.

Chapter Thirteen.

Chapter Fourteen.

Chapter Fifteen.

Chapter Sixteen.

Chapter Seventeen.

Chapter Eighteen.

Chapter Nineteen.

Chapter Twenty.

Chapter Twenty-One.

Chapter Twenty-Two.

Chapter Twenty-Three.

Chapter Twenty-Four.

Chapter Twenty-Five.

Chapter Twenty-Six.

Chapter Twenty-Seven.

Chapter Twenty-Eight.

Chapter Twenty-Nine.

Chapter Thirty.

 

Real Change is Incremental.

Louis has books and stories available from Google Play.

 

 

Thank you for reading.