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Monday, January 27, 2025

Dead Reckoning, Chapter Twenty-Nine. An Inspector Gilles Maintenon Mystery #10. Louis Shalako.







Louis Shalako



The Special Homicide Unit was busy at the best of times. At the worst of times, their small team of detectives were understaffed and overworked. It was a small part of a larger division of the Sûreté. It was one cog in a much larger machine, and a bit of a dumping ground for the sort of cases that, upon examination, appeared to have had little chance of an arrest, let alone a successful prosecution.

It was only their record of success that justified their existence at all. It was also why Gilles had originally been tapped to head the small, specialized working group in the first place.

Maintenon wasn’t just good. He’d been good, very good, literally for decades now. In other words, it was not just luck and it sure as hell was not a fluke. Flukes happened from time to time, but not a whole bunch, not all in a big long row like that. That’s not to say they didn’t have their failures, because they did—everyone had their failures and the homicide business was no different than any other.

Maybe that was Smirnov’s problem. He hadn’t accounted for the possibility of failure.

Smirnov had believed himself to be the smartest guy in the world, a type Hubert had run across before.

Hubert was in the room, poring over report, after report, after report. If he was to have any hope of catching up, let alone even understanding this case, he would have to read every stinking line of it. It was all too possible to get bogged down in the details…

The file was thin enough, but those had been different times. Vadim Smirnov. Only child of Russian émigrés, relatively prosperous people who had been resident in France, but rendered stateless after the Russian Revolution of 1917. As members of the hated bourgeoisie, they would hardly take the risk of going back to Russia. Not if they didn’t have to. The case dated back to 1913, when Gilles—and Archambault, had been young constables, involved in an investigation relating to human smuggling, white slavery and child prostitution. It was believed the victims, a number of attractive young women, a smaller number of attractive young males, all of them underage, some of them of quite a good social background, had been inveigled, whether through drugs, alcohol, psychological extortion, or other means, simple kidnapping perhaps. Some, at least, had been smuggled out of the country and sold as sex-slaves in the harims of certain foreign countries.

Others had ended up in the various stews, brothels right here in town.

Gilles had been an undercover cop working the vice beat at the time—the worst beat of all in some ways, and yet, it was an opportunity. An opportunity to do some good in the world. He was lucky to be there, at the right time and in the right place, with some good relationships with the people around him. This included plenty of civilian sources, and right when it counted most.

Gilles and Archambault had put two and two together. They had come up with a plan. The plan had required certain bait, and certain risks, and time more than anything.  They’d gotten lucky in that poor old Vadim and a couple of others had come along to pick up the package. He’d been convinced by a simple photograph of the merchandise, a rather youthful-looking police woman who had volunteered, (and good for her, too), and to deliver an envelope simply stuffed with money.

Convicted by a jury of his peers—theoretically, at least, although few people were as bent, warped, positively twisted, or even just plain sick, as he was, Smirnov had been sent off to Devil’s Island for twenty-five years. Before leaving, right at his sentencing in fact, he had sworn undying vengeance against all things police, but most of all against Gilles.

Gilles had approached him—Gilles had been totally undercover, and it had taken some little time to establish that bond of trust with Vadim. That sort of thing wasn’t easy to do. Smirnov had liked Gilles. He’d taken him under his wing, made him his protégé, and he had thought they were friends. The fool had been fooled. He didn’t like it much. He saw it as a betrayal, and this coming from someone in his rather peculiar profession, where honour was also seen in a rather peculiar light—assuming you were not one of them, it could seem mighty peculiar indeed. Yet even the criminal underworld had their standards and their pecking-order. Pimps and pedophiles were about as popular as arsonists and anarchist bomb-tossers. The honest thieves saw themselves as above all of that.

Maintenon’s eye-witness testimony on the stand had been convincing. Vadim had to sit there in court and watch and listen, with his carefully-constructed image being destroyed, painfully, for a man of some renown of his own. He was already a successful businessman, with quite a number of small hotels, bars and restaurants. All of them of a rather grimy nature. That was the funny thing about crime, sometimes. To say it was just greed would have been too easy, without actually coming up with an explanation. He obviously knew how to apply himself. The man could have easily done without it and still become a success. He’d also had a penchant for the social scene and a rather brazen philanthropy of the front-page variety. He was a donation-matcher, a known type. The publicity would mention some ludicrous upper limit, a million francs or whatever, knowing that it would never be met and therefore he would never have to cover it. Funny thing was, the journalists never seemed to catch on. They lapped it all right up, with a kind of relish. His cover, and his image of his own self had been smashed in the dirt. His extensive network of criminal contacts had been compromised, and those people would not be too happy either. His more respectable friends had run for the hills, figuratively speaking.

It had been established that the man wasn’t above sampling his own wares from time to time, and that kind of embarrassment hurts.

His properties were gone. His wife had abandoned him, and the kids weren’t speaking to him, although that might have changed over time. It often did. Any shred of genteel respectability he’d once had was gone—and that hurt too.

If he had stashed a little money away somewhere, the police had never been able to trace it, although it was a pretty good bet that he had.

It never seemed to occur to these guys. Devil’s Island was infinitely preferable to the guillotine, which wasn’t exactly known for second chances. There were a few dead bodies here and there, going back years in some cases. Proving the act had been futile. The man had insulated himself well enough to slide on that aspect of the case, or cases, as it turned out. It was more a case of criminal conspiracy to kidnap and extort, and then there was the kiddie stuff—real sex crimes, bad enough for all of that. Gratitude was hardly to be expected, but even so—even so.

And, while Smirnov, was putting in hard labour, in his off hours busy growing root vegetables and leafy greens, begging for cigarette butts, trying not to get fucked up the ass in the meantime, and cursing his fate on Devil’s Island, Gilles and a million others like him had gone off to the War…four, long years of war.

The fucking idiots had let him out, with time off for good behaviour. Word was, he’d been studying the Bible and teaching other inmates how to read—so that they could better understand and appeal their cases, and shit like that. He’d become some kind of a Good Samaritan.

The mug shot was indifferent, faded with time, very small. It could have been almost anyone after a while. So that wasn’t going to be of much help.

And now, he was back in France. He’d been back for some years. Word was, he was back in business, the only business he had ever known—the man was making up for a lot of lost time, or so it seemed. He’d reverted back to type. Interestingly, the physical description matched up with any number of their suspects, although age alone might have let him off. The Bisson character, possibly—they might want to call the sweatshop and clarify on that little matter. Fuck, he couldn’t even recall the manager’s name, although it was in here somewhere.

Smirnov had built up a new organization over the course of several years. He had a big, rambling bar in one of the seedier little side-streets in Montmartre, one with a whole rabbit-warren of tiny rooms up above. With a little money, a small gang of associates, and a lot to lose, Smirnov’s thoughts might very well have come back to good old Gilles Maintenon. So many years, on a remote island, cut off from the very world. The man would have had plenty of time to brood—to think—and to plan.

...Smirnov.

“Regarding Monsieur Smirnov. Historically. Years ago. He’s smuggling people out of the country, the victims possibly drugged or unconscious. What better way, than inside of a bogus deep freezer? Put a bunch of air holes in the bottom, make sure the crate is loosely built in terms of leaving cracks for air to get in. Nail the top on, grease a couple of palms and that load is safe enough. Customs inspections are more of a problem getting stuff into the country. No one cares what goes out, except for possibly gold, or diamonds, or large sums of currency.” Stuff leaving the country was somebody else’s problem, essentially. “The victims would be drugged into unconsciousness…”

Hmn.

If it had worked well enough in the past, he might have used the same idea again.

LeBref looked up from his desk.

“Talking to yourself again. That’s one of the first signs of insanity. That, and hair on the palms of your hands.” There was a pause. “The third sign is looking for it…”

An old joke.

Hubert waved him off.

“Just thinking out loud.”

“Yeah.” LeBref put a few things away, snapped his briefcase shut. “All right. Well, I am out of here.”

Hubert nodded.

Hmn. It could be, Hubert supposed. It was a least some kind of a motive—but why the fucking freezer thing. That one was just plain weird. It did send a certain kind of message. There would be a thousand other people out there with the exact same motive, when you got right down to it. Which didn’t necessarily rule it out as a motive, the only question was, whose motive was it.

Hmn.

He sat and rubbed his eyes for a moment.

Fuck.

***

...just a minor flap here...

Not surprisingly, a busy and important police force such as the Sûreté, was all-in on the latest technology.

This included the tele-printer and the wire-photo services. As a separate unit, the room had their own rather large and expensive machine, with its own unique dial-up number. The whole department didn’t necessarily need to receive every little thing that passed back and forth, and the same went for the unit. They didn’t need to receive every little wanted bulletin, missing person report, or unexplained body found in a gutter. This was more useful to the situation room people down on the ground floor, a kind of clearing house of information for all of Paris, and in the larger sense, all over France and its overseas dependencies.

It was no big surprise when the machine in the back corner made its characteristic buzz, rattle and bang and began to print something out on its long rolling band of perforated paper.

Garnier came in just then, taking off his hat and jacket and hanging them up on the rack by the door. There were sweat stains under the armpits.

“So. How’d it go?”

Garnier dropped into his chair.

“Yeah. Big, white moving van. Stolen weeks ago. Abandoned in an industrial area. Nice—they tucked it in at the end of a long line of similar vehicles. It took some time before anybody clued in that it didn’t actually belong there. Ha. There is nothing really distinctive about it. Monsieur Aubert was kind enough to come along on his lunch hour and have a look. He said it might be the same vehicle or it might not…” According to the odometer reading, it had travelled less than a hundred kilometres in all of that time. “It fits well enough, without a single shred of other evidence to tie it in.”

Towed to the police garage, their technical people were having a look at it but he didn’t expect too much in that regard.

“Basically, the thieves jimmied the door and then hot-wired it. Any kid could do it, with a little knowledge and a bit of nerve.” Still wearing its original number plates, it also reinforced the idea that the thieves must have had somewhere to hide it. “Well, if nothing else, the company will be glad to get it back. Them and the insurance people.”

“Hmn.” Hubert looked over, the machine having gone quiet.

Rising, he went to grab a fresh cup of coffee…and then he’d tear that off and have a look.

And of course the phone on his desk was already ringing, it was about time he had a real good shit, and it was some little time before the significance of that photo, that face, staring up at him from the slightly-curled papers, still warm and smelling of hot ink on his desk sort of hit him—

Maintenon.

 

***

 

Another phone was ringing in the background, then it stopped.

Hubert’s hands shook as he passed sheets to Martin.

“Okay—it’s from Sergeant Dampier in Bagneres de Luchon…he says the girl is in communication with Éliott.”

“LeBeaux.”

“Yes. And he says, she brought them a small hand mirror, with the fingerprints on it, wrapped up in an old pair of socks, and that LeBeaux is holed up with the hermit. She gave them a roll of film, with exactly three exposures. This is from the best one.” He bit his lip. “There was a note. This part scares the shit out of me. He says in the note, apparently the girl is deaf, he says we were followed, he thinks on the way down, but definitely when we were there and on the way back. And the only way to break the tail was to abandon me and jump off the train. And, in his opinion, Gilles’ life is still in danger. Holy, shit.”

He had ten seconds to think—and no more.

“One, get the prints…no, call personnel and tell them to get Maintenon’s dossier up here. We want the prints. His most recent official photo. It’s not about the employment record or his pension contributions, okay? Top secret—tell them they have three minutes.”

“Right.” Martin reached for the phone, ignoring the one that had just begun ringing, no doubt disappointed on their first try only a few moments before…fuck, he had to pick up. “Special Homicide. Garnier here. My apologies. Hold, please.”

He stabbed the button and kept on with his first instruction as Hubert babbled into his own telephone, on the line with the desk downstairs.

“Hello? Hello? Henri? It’s Hubert up in Special Homicide…I need you to find Roger. Yes, that one. I need him like right now. I need you to find Alphonse. Also right now. And I need you to find Delorme or Levain, or both, got that?”

The line squawked a bit but he slammed it down. He rummaged in his desk drawers, frustrated at not being to find it immediately, looking for his big, old-fashioned magnifying glass. He pulled out a couple of tissues and began furiously polishing that.

“How much do you want to bet?”

How much do you want to bet.

“Sorry, no takers—”

Garnier was back on the line.

“Sorry about that, sir. Just a minor flap here. Ah. So. You have a case, and you think we might be able to help. Yes, sir. Ah—send the file on up, and thank you, Inspector.”

He put it down.

“Another case.” He shrugged. “We’ll put it on Firmin’s desk—”

As far as jokes went, that one fell pretty flat.

“Huh.” Hubert was thinking, thinking, thinking—

There was a knock at the door.

“Come in!” Two strong voices bellowed at once.


***


They’d made Mademoiselle Fournier, Eugenie from Personnel, a civilian employee, wait while they examined their prints, three full and a couple of partials. The one big thumb-print was perfect. She’d brought the file at a dead run, judging by the breathing. She would be prepared to wait for the file, or to make them sign for it—one way or the other.

In the meantime, Hubert had handed her the wire-photo image. They compared the official photo from the dossier to the man in the photograph.

“Anybody we know?”

“It—it’s—Maintenon.” Her jaw dropped and she clearly understood the significance of their unusual request for the dossier, which were supposed to be restricted information. “I think! He was down there—at the front desk, inquiring about vacation pay. Don’t forget, he had that beard.”

He’d been down in Personnel a couple of weeks ago, or more, at this point. The trouble was, she really didn’t see the man all that often.

Pulling out a sheet of typing paper, Hubert covered the bottom half of both faces. The official photo had him with a mustache. The photo had been taken several years previously. Gilles had taken up with the neatly trimmed beard more recently. The images were two different sizes, one taken by a good camera in studio light, processed and printed by a true professional. The other image had been taken in bad light, by a strict amateur, developed in some haste, by someone who perhaps wasn’t the best, and then the image had to be scanned in, line by line, reduced to a set of electrical pulses, sent by wire and then reproduced at this end in another sort of blaps of ink on paper sort of process…

Even so, the resemblance was uncanny.

Martin looked up from the fingerprints.

“Holy, shit.”

Hubert gestured toward the young lady.

“Give her the glass.” Neither one of them really knew Gilles, as for himself, his poor old heart was about ready to pop out of his chest.

What he needed, was an objective opinion—maybe even two or three of them, and some kind of a plan.

“Merde…” It was all she said.

None of them were experts in fingerprint analysis, but if those weren’t the prints of Gilles Maintenon, they would all be damned.

“Where in the fuck is Roger—” Hubert, fit to be tied.

His hand hovered over the phone, as he positively willed it to ring, but it didn’t.

 

 

END

 

Previous.

Chapter One, Scene One.

Chapter One, Scene Two.

Chapter Two.

Chapter Three.

Chapter Four.

Chapter Five.

Chapter Six.

Chapter Seven.

Chapter Eight.

Chapter Nine.

Chapter Ten.

Chapter Eleven.

Chapter Twelve.

Chapter Thirteen.

Chapter Fourteen.

Chapter Fifteen.

Chapter Sixteen.

Chapter Seventeen.

Chapter Eighteen.

Chapter Nineteen.

Chapter Twenty.

Chapter Twenty-One.

Chapter Twenty-Two.

Chapter Twenty-Three.

Chapter Twenty-Four.

Chapter Twenty-Five.

Chapter Twenty-Six.

Chapter Twenty-Seven.

Chapter Twenty-Eight.


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Friday, January 24, 2025

Dead Reckoning, Chapter Twenty-Seven. An Inspector Gilles Maintenon Mystery #10. Louis Shalako.

Aubert: an uncle in the furniture business.









Louis Shalako



“I have an uncle in the furniture business. That’s how I got this job in the first place.”

Monsieur Aubert of Aubert Fine Furnishings and Appliances was a rather large and florid man in his mid-thirties. A not very subtle comb-over did little to hide the early-onset male baldness although the hair that was left was still black with no trace of grey.

The three of them stood in the middle of their household appliance section.

It was a large store, two thousand square metres. It was a big, rambling space for this part of the city, two full floors, most of it devoted to the softer furnishings, couches, chairs, lamps and tables, and then there were the cabinets, dining sets and other wooden wares.

“So, what was different about this particular sale?”

“Yes. I distinctly asked if it might have been better to get a much larger, commercial freezer, but he said no. It was just that he, or they, he and his wife, they had a big family, and a big house too, which was fortunate for them. He made a little joke of it.”

The average household might be at the butcher’s shop every day or two, looking for fresh meat or even just soup bones. There were those who invested in a side of beef, or a quarter, all cut up and packaged. Some subscribed to frozen food services, including vegetables and berries, fish and poultry. The savings over time might be significant, assuming one had the freezer space to hold it. There were those with a home garden, freezing and canning all the fruits, berries and vegetables in season.

It all took up a lot of freezer space.

According to him, they were fortunate to have two of the same model in stock. A previous customer had taken a look at their display model, plumped down the required deposit, and so they’d ordered one straight from the factory. They generally took a couple of days to arrive. When he’d called that particular customer, in order to ask them when they’d like to accept delivery, (and to write a nice little cheque for the remainder), the telephone number had been out of service. He’d been relieved when another customer had wanted two of the exact same article. Now, of course, it was looking like a pretty fortuitous coincidence—for somebody.

It they ever turned up, he would cheerfully refund their deposit, or, just maybe—order another unit for them, and hope they didn’t vanish again. If the gentlemen did call back, he would definitely call the police.

That other person’s name was Guy Landry and it would almost certainly be fake. The address he’d given was probably bogus as well. The detectives exchanged a glance upon hearing this—but now, even the civilians were making deductions. Putting a lot of detail into a news story was a two-edged sword, not that they needed much of a reminder.

“Did this second man give a name? What did he look like, what was he wearing. You say he paid cash—” Garnier was handling this one, and he seemed good enough at it.

“Hmn. The name was Thierry. The other thing was the wife. As often as not, they’re tagging along with the husband. Especially on a major household purchase. It’s a question of the colour, sometimes. They say the human eye can distinguish over a million different hues. Women, as you know, have a name for every single one of them. Dressed well enough in a grey suit. He seemed able to afford it, and I had no reason to doubt the story. But this fellow had the moving van along with him, and a wallet full of cash. There were two others with him, ah, the signs on their coveralls said Montgolfier Brothers.”

Monsieur Thierry.

“So he talked about the wife and kids, and yet he came alone.” That wasn’t particularly suspicious, except insofar as it fit the pattern.

“It also seems that money was no object…” Another deduction from the Monsieur, admittedly he was not too far off the mark with that last one.

“Okay. Is it all right if we call back and give you the serial number from, ah, the freezer we have?” Monsieur Aubert could check that against his own records.

“Certainly. I would be only too happy to help.” He smiled. “I’ve worked my ass off my whole life—and it isn’t even halfway done yet. I’m not real fond of thieves, and other such criminal types.”

The gentleman had handed over a substantial sum in cash. They had backed into the loading area at the rear of the store, and loaded up both freezers, one still in the crate and one uncrated, which had to be rolled off the display floor on a sturdy cart that they kept for just such purposes. He pointed out the exact model, lined up among a bunch of smaller units. It was fairly popular and he sold a number of various models each and every month. The furniture business involved shifting a lot of large, heavy objects as he said.

The date was after the theft of the blue delivery vehicle, but well before the thing had appeared in Maintenon’s kitchen. This confirmed more than one surmise. For one, the crime had been long in the preparation required to pull it off.

The plan had been well thought-out and fairly specific in its details.

This particular vehicle had been large, white, with no signs on the sides. Big enough to hold two deep freezers, with plenty of space left over, and then there were the two laborer-types. Monsieur Thierry had walked off down the street, to pick up his own vehicle. Or to catch a bus, a taxi or the Metro, perhaps. At the time, he hadn’t thought too much of it, except for his own good fortune in making the sale. Holding too much in stock tied up a lot of cash, so, why not let the manufacturers store it for him.

On his invitation, the pair followed him through a double doorway and then out into the warehouse. Unlocking the big overhead door, he opened it up.

“See that vehicle?” It was a big, boxy, slab-sided delivery van, also in white. “That’s ours. His was more or less the same size. I have no idea of what business he might have been in. You can rent them by the day or lease them on a longer contract. It’s routine to deliver a new couch, armchairs, beds, refrigerators, all the big stuff, right. For a walk-in to come along, and they have their own vehicle all set to go. It’s just different, that’s all. There are people who have the means and it saves them a small delivery fee. But. This way, the man kept us in the dark as to the address and phone number. And that, is one more reason why I called you.”

Interesting.

“And what did Monsieur Thierry look like, as far as you can recall…” Could you describe the other two gentlemen, and Monsieur Landry.

Did they look or sound foreign, for example…were they of average height, weight, colouring and build sort of thing…they’d been hearing a lot of that lately.

“Ah, let’s see. Oh, one of the ones in coveralls had a mustache, average height, not real heavy. A mop of dark hair. Dark brown eyes…”

Now was the time to whip out the football team picture.

Monsieur Aubert picked out Abu Samaha without hesitation…

That was about as good as it was going to get.

 

***

Éliott had searched for a clean towel, a clean rag, and he had been frustrated in the end.

There were a few rags, scraps of cloth for washing up, even one bath towel, not very clean, but that wasn’t what he needed right now.

The old man, slumped on his bench by the wall, snored softly in the dim light of the fireplace and the guttering stump of one candle. Outside, it was only the stars and the bats, the crickets and the tree-frogs for company and it was about as quiet as he’d ever heard it.

Finally, he had sacrificed his handkerchief, thoroughly soaking it in hot, soapy water. He had to move some junk out of the way including their table. He got his little milking stool and put that in close. Gently, ever so gently, he lifted the man’s chin off of his chest and carefully rotated the head. It was on the left side, up fairly high. Dabbing with the damp pad he’d made of the folded bit of cloth, he began loosening up the dried blood, pus and whatever else might have leaked out of the man’s skull.

Snork.

The man’s eyes popped open, and Éliott held his breath, crouched there at the man’s elbow, all too close in terms of the normal space people liked to have about them. The eyes closed and the snoring started anew.

He let out a careful breath.

He kept dabbing away at it, his once clean handkerchief taking on at first a pink hue, then getting darker and darker as he went along.

There was a lot of swelling in the tissues surrounding the wound. It was all black around the edges. Not much dirt, it was mostly just hair.

The eyes popped open and the head twitched. Éliott hung on to that chin in a kind of gentle violence.

“Argh. Hey. What in the hell are you doing?”

“I’m cleaning up this bloody fucking head wound, sir. We have already discussed this, sir, as you may recall—and you promised. Now, if you don’t mind, please hold still just for one, single, fucking minute longer…”

“Argh. Fuck off.” Groggy with sleep, the man was too lazy to struggle—too surprised, maybe that was it.

He was still pretty drunk, too.

Éliott laughed.

“One more minute, sir, and then I plan on doing just that.”

Actually it took three minutes, with the hermit half awake and half asleep and pretty incoherent.

When he finally made up his mind and questing hands began struggling to find a support, preparatory to getting up, Éliott had to give it up, but only temporarily.

“All right, sir. Let’s get you to bed. Ah—how about a little night-cap? There’s a good bit still in the bottle.” He’d given the girl a little money, nothing too crazy, and hopefully she’d be back tomorrow with another bottle of the good stuff. “I still need to slap a proper bandage on that.”

There was one more thing.

“You know, that swelling. It’s caused by one hell of an infection. I have just the thing, incidentally. I use it all the time. It really is no wonder you haven’t been feeling yourself lately. Have you felt feverish…very hot one minute, chills and stuff the next…any kind of weird headaches, stuff like that…”

Predictably, the question was ignored.

“I have to piss.”

“Good! Good for you, sir, here, let me help you up—please. Why, you’ve had quite a lot to drink, are you sure you’re okay?”

“Fuck you. I know how to piss, young man.”

“Of course you do, sir, of course you do. All righty, then. Off you go—”

Checking his watch, it was coming up on nine p.m., and as long as the days could be at this time of year, it was pretty much pitch-black out there. The cliff itself, and all of those trees made sure of that. The hermit was still struggling to get up, so he grabbed a wrist and an elbow and pulled…

“All right, all right. Let me go, for crying out loud…”

“Here. Hold on there, partner.” Éliott snapped a match and lit one of the little black cheroots for the man. “Take your time. I’m not going anywhere.”

The man took the cigar and staggered for the door, trailing sinuous tendrils of blue smoke. It was like a series of question marks hanging in the air and following him out the door.

The hermit was talking to himself pretty good out there. There was nothing wrong with his vocabulary.

His grin faded.

It might be a good idea to keep an eye and an ear on the man. There was no telling what he might be capable of. Concussions had their side effects, and however or whatever or whoever, had stuck that blow, it must have come damned close to killing him outright.

The shotgun was right there, leaning up against the wall by the front door. He’d been wondering if it was actually loaded. He’d get a chance to look when the old man fell asleep.

As for a little touch of amnesia, hopefully that would pass with time—stranger things had been known to happen. He didn’t know enough about it, but in his impression, permanent amnesia was the exception rather than the rule. This case had not been caused by some underlying medical condition. It had been caused by a short, sharp blow to the head.

He really should have brought three cups, keeping one hidden away, but for the next little part of the plan, he would have to find something that would suffice to grab a few fingerprints. He would polish that up, whatever it turned out to be, something that would not immediately be missed, using his own shirt-tail if it came down to that.

The real key to the situation was the girl. Apparently, she lived just down the road, and while the centre of town was a few kilometres away, she did have a bicycle. He was asking a lot of her—

Extremely protective of the hapless old man, crusty and prickly as he was, she would have to be at her bravest and her most intuitive in order for this to work—and passing notes and mouthing words into her eyes was pretty limited in the sense of what he could do and what he might hope to get away with.

Hopefully she would just trust him.

And only for as long as the hermit considered him another fellow-traveller, just another forgotten man, holding the world in a similar disdain. That was only good so long as it lasted.

With the hermit, that might not be for very long at all.

The gentleman liked his booze and his cigars, and that would be very helpful.

“Don’t get lost out there. There’s still a few bears up in them there hills.”

The sound of water lightly splashing not too far outside the front door was reassuring enough, and another good reason not to go walking around barefoot.

“Fuck off, you stupid bastard.”

Éliott grinned from ear to ear.

That, is exactly what I wanted to hear.

Other than that, and continuing to work on the old man, it was about time to start thinking of his own stomach.

Sausages and beans, eh. Throw a little mustard on there and you got something.

That sounded pretty damned good right about now.

And simple pleasures were the best.

 

END

 

Previous.

Chapter One, Scene One.

Chapter One, Scene Two.

Chapter Two.

Chapter Three.

Chapter Four.

Chapter Five.

Chapter Six.

Chapter Seven.

Chapter Eight.

Chapter Nine.

Chapter Ten.

Chapter Eleven.

Chapter Twelve.

Chapter Thirteen.

Chapter Fourteen.

Chapter Fifteen.

Chapter Sixteen.

Chapter Seventeen.

Chapter Eighteen.

Chapter Nineteen.

Chapter Twenty.

Chapter Twenty-One.

Chapter Twenty-Two.

Chapter Twenty-Three.

Chapter Twenty-Four.

Chapter Twenty-Five.

Chapter Twenty-Six.


Real Change is Incremental.

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